Examiner marks:
Mark: 3 / 8
Examiner Comments:
The candidate was awarded 3 marks because……
The point about life expectancy is entirely lifted from Source 1 and for this reason this part of the response was awarded 1 mark.
The candidate is awarded a mark for evidence to show smoking has decreased and a further mark for obesity increasing.
The candidate’s use of ‘although’ shows she is giving alternative points of view – 2 marks.
Total mark = 3/8.