Question
Total marks—20
You are preparing an application for the job advertised below and you write an e-mail in Gaelic to the company.
Bòrd na Gàidhlig
Tha Bòrd na Gàidhlig a’ lorg neach a thig a dh’obair anns an oifis aca ann an Inbhir Nis. Feumaidh eòlas a bhith agad air Gàidhlig agus feumaidh sgilean coimpiutaireachd a bhith agad.
Airson tuilleadh fiosrachaidh no airson do chunntas-beatha a chur thugainn, cuir fios gu: oifis@bord-na-gaidhlig.com.
Checklist
To help you to write your e-mail, you have been given the following checklist of information to give about yourself and to ask about the job.
You must include all of these points:
- Personal details (name, age, where you live)
- School/college/education experience until now
- Skills/interests you have which make you right for the job
- Related work experience
- Your experience of Gaelic
- What your computer skills are like
Use all of the above to help you write the e-mail in Gaelic. The e-mail should be approximately 120–150 words. You may use a Gaelic dictionary.
Marking Instruction
Task: E-mail application for a job in this country or abroad, including information specified in six bullet points.
Assessment process:
Candidates will write a piece of extended writing in the modern language by addressing six bullet points. These bullet points will follow on from a job-related scenario. The bullet points will cover the four contexts of society, learning, employability and culture to allow candidates to use and adapt learned material. The first four bullet points will be the same each year and the last two will change to suit the scenario. Candidates need to address these ‘unpredictable bullet points’ in detail to access the full range of marks.
With reference to Content, Accuracy and Language resource, assess the overall quality of the candidate’s response and allocate it to a pegged mark. It is important to assess how candidates have addressed bullet points and detail in relation to this as highlighted in bold in Content.

Your Mark
Your marks:
Reveal examiner feedback
Examiner marks:
Mark: 12 / 20
Examiner Comments:
This piece of evidence exemplifies a script awarded 12 marks for the Writing element of this Course Assessment component.
Candidates were required to respond to a job advert by addressing four predictable bullet points and two unpredictable bullet points.
The candidate was awarded 12 marks for the following reasons:
Paragraphs 1 and 2
- These paragraphs are fairly accurate
- Candidate correctly used an adjective with a feminine noun (ùidh mhòr).
- Candidate attempted to use a connective (chionn ’s)
- A few minor errors (comasach math; ann obair seo faighinn, etc)
Paragraphs 3 and 4
- The candidate has attempted to address the two unpredictable bullet points and, with the exception of the last sentence of paragraph 4, was not able to match the standard of paragraphs 1 and 2. The candidate did not write coherent, accurate sentences.
Application of Marking Principles for National 5 Writing
Content:
- The candidate addressed 5 bullet points. Candidate did not address the fourth bullet point (related work experience).
- The candidate copes fairly well with areas of personal details, education and skills. The candidate provided limited details about work experience
Accuracy:
- The candidate was able to use memorised material in order to competently address the four predictable bullet points. The candidate was not successful in providing accurate responses to the two unpredictable bullet points.
- Overall, there is more correct than incorrect.
Language resource:
- The candidate used a fairly basic range of constructions (Tha…; ‘S e …as fheàrr leam; Bidh mi…; Bu thoigh leam..; Is toigh leam… and Bha mi..
- The candidate did not demonstrate awareness of any regular or irregular verbs.